docs: Cleanup Markdown

I was going through the new version of the docs and noticed a few
problems.  Mostly URLs that aren't linked, extra whitespace, and a few
mis-spellings.

I ran the files through `aspell check` and made some manual changes
myself.

These changes were tested locally with `mkdocs serve`
This commit is contained in:
Micah Abbott 2016-03-16 15:02:18 -04:00
parent 89624ee57d
commit 0b068c668a
8 changed files with 37 additions and 38 deletions

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@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ provide a minimal host for Docker formatted Linux containers.
Replicating a base immutable OS, then using Docker for applications
meshes together two different tools with different tradeoffs.
[xdg-app](https://github.com/alexlarsson/xdg-app) uses OSTree
[xdg-app](https://github.com/alexlarsson/xdg-app) uses OSTree
for desktop application containers.
[GNOME Continuous](https://wiki.gnome.org/Projects/GnomeContinuous) is
@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ More documentation
New! See the docs online at [Read The Docs (OSTree)](https://ostree.readthedocs.org/en/latest/ )
Some more information is available on the old wiki page:
https://wiki.gnome.org/Projects/OSTree
<https://wiki.gnome.org/Projects/OSTree>
Contributing
------------

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@ -3,17 +3,18 @@ Submitting patches
You can:
1. Send mail to ostree-list@gnome.org, with the patch attached
1. Submit a pull request against https://github.com/GNOME/ostree
1. Attach them to https://bugzilla.gnome.org/
1. Send mail to <ostree-list@gnome.org>, with the patch attached
1. Submit a pull request against <https://github.com/GNOME/ostree>
1. Attach them to <https://bugzilla.gnome.org/>
Please look at "git log" and match the commit log style.
Please look at `git log` and match the commit log style.
Running the test suite
----------------------
Currently, ostree uses https://wiki.gnome.org/GnomeGoals/InstalledTests
To run just ostree's tests:
Currently, OSTree uses <https://wiki.gnome.org/GnomeGoals/InstalledTests>
To run just OSTree's tests:
./configure ... --enable-installed-tests
gnome-desktop-testing-runner -p 0 ostree/
@ -47,16 +48,16 @@ This is an example of an "early exit":
myfunc (...)
{
gboolean ret = FALSE;
/* some code */
/* some more code */
if (condition)
return FALSE;
/* some more code */
ret = TRUE;
out:
return ret;
@ -85,14 +86,14 @@ functions, particularly inside loops. For example, rather than:
{
/* deeply nested code */
}
/* more nested code */
}
}
}
Instead do this:
static gboolean
helperfunc (..., GError **error)
{
@ -100,22 +101,21 @@ Instead do this:
{
/* deeply nested code */
}
/* more nested code */
return ret;
}
while (condition)
{
/* some code */
if (!condition)
continue;
for (i = 0; i < somevalue; i++)
{
if (!helperfunc (..., i, error))
goto out;
}
}

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@ -140,7 +140,7 @@ Now, because we are merely installing new packages and not
removing anything, we can make the major optimization of reusing
our existing filesystem tree, and merely
*layering* the composed filesystem tree of
these new packages on top. A command like this:
these new packages on top. A command like this:
```
ostree commit -b osname/releasename/description

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@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ exactly one ref, which is stored in the `.origin` file for the
deployment. The command `ostree admin upgrade`
implements this.
o begin a simple upgrade, OSTree fetches the contents of the ref from
To begin a simple upgrade, OSTree fetches the contents of the ref from
the remote server. Suppose we're tracking a ref named
`exampleos/buildmaster/x86_64-runtime`. OSTree fetches the URL
`http://$example.com/repo/refs/exampleos/buildmaster/x86_64-runtime`,
@ -56,11 +56,10 @@ checking it back out of the repo into a deployment.
Given a commit to deploy, OSTree first allocates a directory for
it. This is of the form `/boot/loader/entries/ostree-$osname-$checksum.$serial.conf`.
he $serial is normally 0, but if a
The `$serial` is normally 0, but if a
given commit is deployed more than once, it will be incremented.
his is supported because the previous deployment may have
configuration in `/etc`
hat we do not want to use or overwrite.
configuration in `/etc` that we do not want to use or overwrite.
Now that we have a deployment directory, a 3-way merge is
performed between the (by default) currently booted deployment's
@ -74,7 +73,7 @@ hardlink farm; the running system is untouched, and the bootloader
configuration is untouched. We want to add this deployment o the
"deployment list".
To support a more general case, OSTree supports atomic ransitioning
To support a more general case, OSTree supports atomic transitioning
between arbitrary sets of deployments, with the restriction that the
currently booted deployment must always be in the new set. In the
normal case, we have exactly one deployment, which is the booted one,

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@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ OSTree is designed to boot directly into exactly one deployment
at a time; each deployment is intended to be a target for
`chroot()` or equivalent.
### "osname": Group of deployments that share /var</title>
### "osname": Group of deployments that share /var
Each deployment is grouped in exactly one "osname". From above, you
can see that an osname is physically represented in the

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@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ or an unprivileged container.
## Static deltas
OSTree itself was originally focused on a continous delivery model, where
OSTree itself was originally focused on a continuous delivery model, where
client systems are expected to update regularly. However, many OS vendors
would like to supply content that's updated e.g. once a month or less often.
@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ object. Static deltas also support `from NULL`, where the client can
more efficiently download a commit object from scratch.
Effectively, we're spending server-side storage (and one-time compute
cost), and gaining efficiency in client network bandwith.
cost), and gaining efficiency in client network bandwidth.
## Static delta repository layout
@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ management easier for filesystem tools
A delta is named `$(mbase64 $from)-$(mbase64 $to)`, for example
`GpTyZaVut2jXFPWnO4LJiKEdRTvOw_mFUCtIKW1NIX0-L8f+VVDkEBKNc1Ncd+mDUrSVR4EyybQGCkuKtkDnTwk`,
which in sha256 format is
which in SHA256 format is
`1a94f265a56eb768d714f5a73b82c988a11d453bcec3f985502b48296d4d217d-2fc7fe5550e410128d73535c77e98352b495478132c9b4060a4b8ab640e74f09`.
Finally, the actual content can be found in
@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ The superblock contains:
- delta generation timestamp
- the new commit object
- An array of recursive deltas to apply
- An array of per-part metadata, including total object sizes (compressed and uncompressed),
- An array of per-part metadata, including total object sizes (compressed and uncompressed),
- An array of fallback objects
Let's define a delta part, then return to discuss details:
@ -160,14 +160,14 @@ a per-file delta algorithm called
[bsdiff](https://github.com/mendsley/bsdiff) that most notably works
well on executable code.
The current delta compiler scans for files with maching basenamesin
The current delta compiler scans for files with matching basenames in
each commit that have a similar size, and attempts a bsdiff between
them. (It would make sense later to have a build system provide a
hint for this - for example, files within a same package).
A generated bsdiff is included in the payload blob, and applying it is
an instruction.
## Fallback objects
It's possible for there to be large-ish files which might be resistant

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@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
# OSTree Overview
## Introduction
## Introduction
OSTree an upgrade system for Linux-based operating systems that
performs atomic upgrades of complete filesystem trees. It is
@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ content-addressed object store, and layered on top of that is
bootloader configuration, management of
`/etc`, and other functions to perform an
upgrade beyond just replicating files.
You can use OSTree standalone in the pure replication model,
but another approach is to add a package manager on top,
thus creating a hybrid tree/package system.
@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ HTTP, and where the OS includes (if desired) an entirely
separate mechanism to install applications, stored in `/var` if they're system global, or
`/home` for per-user
application installation. An example application mechanism is
http://docker.io/
<http://docker.io/>
However, it is entirely possible to use OSTree underneath a
package system, where the contents of `/usr` are computed on the client.

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@ -54,12 +54,12 @@ modes: `bare`, `bare-user`, and `archive-z2`. A bare repository is
one where content files are just stored as regular files; it's
designed to be the source of a "hardlink farm", where each operating
system checkout is merely links into it. If you want to store files
owned by e.g. root in this mode, you must run OSTree as root.
owned by e.g. root in this mode, you must run OSTree as root.
The `bare-user` is a later addition that is like `bare` in that files
are unpacked, but it can (and should generally) be created as
non-root. In this mode, extended metadata such as owner uid, gid, and
extended attributes are stored but not actually applied.
extended attributes are stored but not actually applied.
The `bare-user` mode is useful for build systems that run as non-root
but want to generate root-owned content, as well as non-root container
systems.