docs: Cleanup Markdown

I was going through the new version of the docs and noticed a few
problems.  Mostly URLs that aren't linked, extra whitespace, and a few
mis-spellings.

I ran the files through `aspell check` and made some manual changes
myself.

These changes were tested locally with `mkdocs serve`
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Micah Abbott 2016-03-16 15:02:18 -04:00
parent 89624ee57d
commit 0b068c668a
8 changed files with 37 additions and 38 deletions

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@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ More documentation
New! See the docs online at [Read The Docs (OSTree)](https://ostree.readthedocs.org/en/latest/ )
Some more information is available on the old wiki page:
https://wiki.gnome.org/Projects/OSTree
<https://wiki.gnome.org/Projects/OSTree>
Contributing
------------

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@ -3,17 +3,18 @@ Submitting patches
You can:
1. Send mail to ostree-list@gnome.org, with the patch attached
1. Submit a pull request against https://github.com/GNOME/ostree
1. Attach them to https://bugzilla.gnome.org/
1. Send mail to <ostree-list@gnome.org>, with the patch attached
1. Submit a pull request against <https://github.com/GNOME/ostree>
1. Attach them to <https://bugzilla.gnome.org/>
Please look at "git log" and match the commit log style.
Please look at `git log` and match the commit log style.
Running the test suite
----------------------
Currently, ostree uses https://wiki.gnome.org/GnomeGoals/InstalledTests
To run just ostree's tests:
Currently, OSTree uses <https://wiki.gnome.org/GnomeGoals/InstalledTests>
To run just OSTree's tests:
./configure ... --enable-installed-tests
gnome-desktop-testing-runner -p 0 ostree/
@ -118,4 +119,3 @@ Instead do this:
goto out;
}
}

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@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ exactly one ref, which is stored in the `.origin` file for the
deployment. The command `ostree admin upgrade`
implements this.
o begin a simple upgrade, OSTree fetches the contents of the ref from
To begin a simple upgrade, OSTree fetches the contents of the ref from
the remote server. Suppose we're tracking a ref named
`exampleos/buildmaster/x86_64-runtime`. OSTree fetches the URL
`http://$example.com/repo/refs/exampleos/buildmaster/x86_64-runtime`,
@ -56,11 +56,10 @@ checking it back out of the repo into a deployment.
Given a commit to deploy, OSTree first allocates a directory for
it. This is of the form `/boot/loader/entries/ostree-$osname-$checksum.$serial.conf`.
he $serial is normally 0, but if a
The `$serial` is normally 0, but if a
given commit is deployed more than once, it will be incremented.
his is supported because the previous deployment may have
configuration in `/etc`
hat we do not want to use or overwrite.
configuration in `/etc` that we do not want to use or overwrite.
Now that we have a deployment directory, a 3-way merge is
performed between the (by default) currently booted deployment's
@ -74,7 +73,7 @@ hardlink farm; the running system is untouched, and the bootloader
configuration is untouched. We want to add this deployment o the
"deployment list".
To support a more general case, OSTree supports atomic ransitioning
To support a more general case, OSTree supports atomic transitioning
between arbitrary sets of deployments, with the restriction that the
currently booted deployment must always be in the new set. In the
normal case, we have exactly one deployment, which is the booted one,

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@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ OSTree is designed to boot directly into exactly one deployment
at a time; each deployment is intended to be a target for
`chroot()` or equivalent.
### "osname": Group of deployments that share /var</title>
### "osname": Group of deployments that share /var
Each deployment is grouped in exactly one "osname". From above, you
can see that an osname is physically represented in the

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@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ or an unprivileged container.
## Static deltas
OSTree itself was originally focused on a continous delivery model, where
OSTree itself was originally focused on a continuous delivery model, where
client systems are expected to update regularly. However, many OS vendors
would like to supply content that's updated e.g. once a month or less often.
@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ object. Static deltas also support `from NULL`, where the client can
more efficiently download a commit object from scratch.
Effectively, we're spending server-side storage (and one-time compute
cost), and gaining efficiency in client network bandwith.
cost), and gaining efficiency in client network bandwidth.
## Static delta repository layout
@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ management easier for filesystem tools
A delta is named `$(mbase64 $from)-$(mbase64 $to)`, for example
`GpTyZaVut2jXFPWnO4LJiKEdRTvOw_mFUCtIKW1NIX0-L8f+VVDkEBKNc1Ncd+mDUrSVR4EyybQGCkuKtkDnTwk`,
which in sha256 format is
which in SHA256 format is
`1a94f265a56eb768d714f5a73b82c988a11d453bcec3f985502b48296d4d217d-2fc7fe5550e410128d73535c77e98352b495478132c9b4060a4b8ab640e74f09`.
Finally, the actual content can be found in
@ -160,7 +160,7 @@ a per-file delta algorithm called
[bsdiff](https://github.com/mendsley/bsdiff) that most notably works
well on executable code.
The current delta compiler scans for files with maching basenamesin
The current delta compiler scans for files with matching basenames in
each commit that have a similar size, and attempts a bsdiff between
them. (It would make sense later to have a build system provide a
hint for this - for example, files within a same package).

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@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ HTTP, and where the OS includes (if desired) an entirely
separate mechanism to install applications, stored in `/var` if they're system global, or
`/home` for per-user
application installation. An example application mechanism is
http://docker.io/
<http://docker.io/>
However, it is entirely possible to use OSTree underneath a
package system, where the contents of `/usr` are computed on the client.